Anaïs runs the life of the most feared mafia boss in Marseille down to the second, and guards a secret no one at that office would ever guess. When he overhears her whisper 'baby' into the phone, the man who controls everything goes cold as stone, and cannot control what the thought of losing her is doing to him.
Love this story as she learns her agency with him.
The narrators need to pick up the pace. They nearly put me to sleep. The story is not your very best, but would improve significantly if the narrators were more energetic.
Kathy, that is fair, and I would rather hear it than watch you drift off. But before I go fix anything, try this tonight: the little gear in the corner of the player lets you speed the narration up. Most people never find it, and on a slow read it changes everything. Give it a go and tell me if it lands better. ❤️
Its not just that its to slow but does Thierry sounding like an English butler make sense when he’s an Italian mobster?