Ivy laughed at the most feared man in Chicago in front of a room full of his men, and she was certain it would cost her everything. Days later she learned her family owed him a debt, and the only way to save her brother was to marry the very man she humiliated.
Male narrator speaks in her name! Gets confusing
You're right, and thank you for saying it. When one narrator voices both people, it blurs who's speaking, and that pulls you out of the story. We're working on keeping the voices distinct so it's always clear who is who. Notes like yours are exactly how we fix it.
I don’t understand why they shot him? Good story with good narrators except for the part two. You couldn’t tell who was talking, the guy or the girl.
English butler voice the most un sexy voice yuck. Confusing I thought it was him but it was her.
I hope it's a good one 🤞