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I have commented twice. The first I have away a spoiler. What channel was flagged. So I wrote another comment with an apology simply saying I loved the book. This comment will also probably get flagged so I'll do another one after this with just a lovely heart.
Ah sorry I have a spoiler away. You obviously worked hard on this complex story. I loved it from start to finish. Thank you ♥️
I loved this part 2. There was. obviously a lot of complex work done by you. The twist in this one was completely unexpected. Chloe's arrest had me so angry at that horrible narcissist husband. I am so glad that Chloe and deluca got back together again. The sexual parts were described perfectly. Thank you ♥️
Your comment makes us so happy and motivates us to keep improving our stories, Elizabeth! I absolutely loved your feedback 😊❤️❤️
Lena- lovely story overall- I hope you don’t mind if I mention that there was a sentence in book one where you use the word her two times. The first time was incorrect, in the nominative case and the second was correct. I only mention it because it distracts my listening like nails on a chalkboard. Most people probably don’t know the difference or care if they did, but I was raised by an immigrant from Germany, and my dad was an English teacher. When mom did not know something, Dad gave her a Dictionary to look it up. My mom ended up speaking English better than most, even doing the Sunday New York Times crossword. We were raised with “the king’s English”. I remember comments like “a hen lays eggs, you lay the table, but you (or dogs) lie down.” anyway, just a respectful suggestion.
I loved this story. Great sensual scen s
Hi Catarina! I'm so glad you enjoyed our story. Stay tuned because we'll have lots of new things coming to the platform soon, especially stories from other categories. Feel free to ask if you need anything 😊😊❤️
The flow of dialog and story line is smooth and easy to fallow. Both part 1 and 2 are an actually 10 stars for each story not just 5. Thank-you 😏😘❤️
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I have commented twice. The first I have away a spoiler. What channel was flagged. So I wrote another comment with an apology simply saying I loved the book. This comment will also probably get flagged so I'll do another one after this with just a lovely heart.
Ah sorry I have a spoiler away. You obviously worked hard on this complex story. I loved it from start to finish. Thank you ♥️
I loved this part 2. There was. obviously a lot of complex work done by you. The twist in this one was completely unexpected. Chloe's arrest had me so angry at that horrible narcissist husband. I am so glad that Chloe and deluca got back together again. The sexual parts were described perfectly. Thank you ♥️
Your comment makes us so happy and motivates us to keep improving our stories, Elizabeth! I absolutely loved your feedback 😊❤️❤️
Lena- lovely story overall- I hope you don’t mind if I mention that there was a sentence in book one where you use the word her two times. The first time was incorrect, in the nominative case and the second was correct. I only mention it because it distracts my listening like nails on a chalkboard. Most people probably don’t know the difference or care if they did, but I was raised by an immigrant from Germany, and my dad was an English teacher. When mom did not know something, Dad gave her a Dictionary to look it up. My mom ended up speaking English better than most, even doing the Sunday New York Times crossword. We were raised with “the king’s English”. I remember comments like “a hen lays eggs, you lay the table, but you (or dogs) lie down.” anyway, just a respectful suggestion.
I loved this story. Great sensual scen s
Hi Catarina! I'm so glad you enjoyed our story. Stay tuned because we'll have lots of new things coming to the platform soon, especially stories from other categories. Feel free to ask if you need anything 😊😊❤️
The flow of dialog and story line is smooth and easy to fallow. Both part 1 and 2 are an actually 10 stars for each story not just 5. Thank-you 😏😘❤️
