Their first night together in detail.
*male voice is bad.
Not liking this make voice. The soft accent is nice, but the straining/raspy quality of his voice makes him sound like an old man. Haha
I’m not sure I like this story. Also it was to short.
Robin, the "too short" feedback is one I keep getting on this one and I'm taking it seriously. The next stories have more breathing room. If you want, write to me at lena@mystoriesromance.com and tell me what didn't land for you, that helps me a lot more than I can explain.