Trapped in a stalled elevator with the most beautiful stranger she has ever seen, Nerissa whispers a confession she is certain no one will hear, that she is broke, untouched, and completely undone by him. What she does not know is that he is Severo Bellandi, the most powerful mafia Don in Chicago, and he caught every single word. Hours later, with a room full of rich heiresses waiting to be chosen as his bride, he ignores every last one of them and points straight at the girl carrying the dessert tray.
It’s confusing when you use the male voice for the female characters when you’ve been using it for the male voice before.
Thank you for flagging this, Robin 💛 You're so right — keeping the voices consistent really matters for staying inside the story. I'll be more careful with that. I so appreciate you helping me make it better. 🤍
I agree, I had the same problem. I love your stories & absolutely love having the male voice but since it’s not in part 1, I had to rewind several times in part 2 out of confusion on whose part it was. Thank you for your great stories. 🥰