For six years Vera has been the only person in Chicago who can tell the head of the Outfit no, and the only one who has never touched him. Then the federal government takes him, and she finds the defense that wins in nine days. He forbids her to use it. He will not say why. And she has seventy days to find out what he is willing to die for.
I really prefer this format, especially with the alternating perspectives of the two main characters. I'm not quite sure where Book 1 ends and Book 2 begins, or if this is just one book. While the details are more relevant, there is definitely room for improvement. The beginning drags on for quite a while without adding much value, especially since the plot is already familiar by the midpoint. However, I do see a significant positive change: this book no longer sticks to the same template as others, which I really appreciate. Thank you for your effort.
I’m having a hard enough time getting through book 1. You’re all over the place. Why can’t you be more straight forward. I already fell asleep once trying to get through this. I’m going to try and finish it though.
Ok when you got to the trial it was more straightforward. I liked it. I don’t want you to ruin the vibe by writing book 2 unless it is happy. But your book 2 are usually so no book 2.
Miss Lena, ah book 2 is anti-climactic...unless she gets a baby, or he has an antagonist waiting like a snake in the grass or the prosecutor didn't know somebody else knows about her cutting corners, and reports her to the bar or told somebody in passing about her short-cut and now she gotta fight for her law license or the bad guy she locked up comes at her from jail! No on book 2, I'm an old romantic, let sleeping dogs lie!
This story wods absolutely outstanding fantastic over the heights mountains…Pia from Denmark 🇩🇰 🙂❤️
Absolutely brilliant build up n revelation. I like this new format..it doesn't follow a pattern. Every story has a different flow
Margaret, that is exactly what we hoped someone would feel. No pattern to follow means every story can breathe in its own way, and you saw it straight away. ❤️
Thank you for acknowledging your faithful followers. Sooo cool🥰
Yes, book 2!!!
Lena you outdid yourself. Absolutely on Book 2. Thoroughly enjoying the new direction.
Thank you, that means the world coming after this one. This film is the whole story, so the ending you saw is the real one, but you are not the only one asking me for more. I am listening. ❤️
Hi Lena ♡ Bring it! Book 2 please! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Bring us part two!
Yes! Book 2 please!