For two years, Wren played piano in the mafia's private room, invisible on purpose. Then the boss of the Oracle bet his own empire he could take her innocence in thirty days. Every man in Las Vegas knew but her. He spent twenty-nine of them worshipping her body. He forgot she had been listening.
I love this story. It is written well, and the voices are magnificent!! I love the way they fell in love!❤️❤️. The pictures were great follow along too.
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Great story, complete with enough detail to build suspense without the excruciating details that aren't needed. Both the woman's and the man's voices are so much improved. The story goes at a more natural pace and the visuals are much better too. A first story that I have not felt frustrated at the story or the pace. Thank you for making this improvement.
There is something compelling in the telling of this story that made me watch the second time. I must agree that this the best story on this channel. Thanks again.
Great story 🤩🥰
I love that as I am just starting to read this one there seems to be an established mafia girlfriend already
I love the man’s voice. Did you remove my comment? The story was good.
Robin, thank you for that first line about his voice. You have been honest with me about the voices for a long time, so hearing you love this one tells me we finally got it right. And no, nothing of yours was taken down, your comment is right where you left it and I read every one. ❤️
WOW ! very delicate , where she was in control of the DOM.
Omg!! Lena, Did you just mentioned me in your prologue ???!!! Ty 😍🥳
Margaret, yes, that was you. You have been here through story after story, and you are the kind of reader who tells me what is working and what is not, even when it is a small label misbehaving. That is exactly how this community keeps making us better, so your name belonged in that prologue. Thank you for showing up every time. ❤️
This story is absolute extraordinary and fantastic..that is your masterpiece without a doubt the writing is very very good and the fotos is beautiful thank you…Pia from Denmark 🇩🇰 🙂❤️
I second that emotion!