On her very first day, Isolde tore into the company's insufferable billionaire boss to a stranger in the elevator, never once guessing he was Darian Wolfe himself. Instead of firing her, he set out to break her, and the harder he pushed, the more he wanted the one woman who never bowed to him. The man who owns everything has never craved anyone the way he craves the girl who refused to flatter him.
He is just coming home from the hospital, learned he has a life-threatening disease and his company is in jeopardy, and she is so heartless that she leaves him and makes it all about herself? Please have some oversight over your AI and cull out some of these ridiculous plot points.
That reaction is exactly what that scene is meant to stir, so thank you for feeling it so fully. I love that you are this invested in them. Tell me, by the time you reached the end, where did you land on her?
I hear your frustration, and I am glad you told me instead of holding it in. When a character's choice feels cold, it pulls you right out of the love story, and that matters to me. Real people read and shape these stories, and feedback like yours is exactly how we keep them human. Thank you for caring enough to say it.
Book 1s are losing the intimacy and spice
I hear you Nancy, and thank you for saying it. The spice and the pull of Book 1 matter to me, and I am taking this straight to the team. Which story got that intensity just right for you?